janu ke mushkil hai sab
par namumkin na manu kabhi
har path par hai kathinai jhagmag ,
har na lekin manu kabhi.
pathik bani main dhund rahi hu,
nek manjhil ke rah anek.
har rah banae saki mujhko,
chun na pau unme ek.
thuk rau yadi kintu rah,
mere liye kya bach paega SHESH kabhi?
yadi pag n authau sahi rah,
to main kya,
honge fir VISHESH sabhi.
D shivani
nagpur
IN hindi
जानु के मुश्कील है सब,
पर नामुमकीन ना मानु कभी,
हर पथ पर है कथिनाइ झगमग,
पर हार ना लेकीन मानु कभी.
पथिक बनी मै धुन्ड रही हू,
नेक मन्झिल के राह अनेक;
हर राह बनाए साकी मुझको,
चुन ना पाउ उनमे एक.
थुकराउ यदी कीन्तु राह,
मेरे लीये क्या बच पाएगा शेश कभी?
यदी पग ना ऊथाउ सही राह,
तो मै क्या,होन्गे फ़ीर वीशेश सभी.
D shivani
nagpur.
5 comments:
wah wah wah wah
deeply in fluenced by...........
but very nice.....
simply gr88!!!
salute to shiv
well i liked visheshh.
this poem is Silent and thoghful one .
one can discover & read betwen the lines .
so as rasika and praj are right in saying wah gr8
nice one
THANKS TO ALL OF YOU...........
AS PRANJALI SAID
YES IT IS INFLUENCED BY SOMTHING AND SOME ONE TOOO AND HE IS NNONE OTHER THAT HARIVANSH RAY BACCHAN......
I LL TRY MY BEST TO EXPLORE MORE VISELY AND KINDLY IN WORDS.......
THANKS ALOT
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